Do you find this interesting?

I think it could be interesting depending on where you're going with the story and what came before. I do have problems with some of the grammar and spelling though....when you refer to something between two or more people it's 'our' not 'are.' The note from the dad uses the word 'resent' for 'represent.' There are some places where a capitol letter would be better. Like for 'papa,' he's using it to represent his name so it should be 'Papa.' First words in a quote should be capitolized. The theme of the story sounds like a good one. I hope you'll use a really good program that will check spelling and grammar to spiff it up a bit. Do you have anyone to proofread it for you? Polishing it up to make it presentable is a good first step after writing.